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The Sun said to Chicago,
"Oh land of sad, sad stone-"
That is all I heard, as the radiance
Was devoured by the continuingcloud
The sun does not shine in Chicago.
I saw many faces here
Who would've been sad,
But they were empty instead.
I saw two silvery ghosts, deer,
Convene in an empty lot.
They conversed, in Silvan tongues,
"Shall we leave then?"
"Yes- the grass is losing here.
The trees are dead, the stones are
Slaves
To the hands of the empty."
The city's metro wurms squirm;
They are infesting the ground.
They scream, unlike the silent dying
Of Novum Eboracum, Screaming
They are emerging, speeding toward
The stable of the planes and back.
Oh Deus,
This is a sad place.
The clouds are continuous,
("It just lets nothing through!")
And there is no hole for sun or light.
Where has the light gone from here?
All the travelers are angry;
Furious smoke bellowing dragons
Populate the streets. They screech
And complain to one another loudly
Over and over. It deadens the ears,
It deafens and batters them.
There is no sun here,
And Luna was elsewhere.
It did not wish to watch this city,
Both left together,
And Luna wept that her Children
The Second-born, would forget
Happiness and love and
All virtue that Life had in it.
"Oh land of sad, sad stone-"
That is all I heard, as the radiance
Was devoured by the continuingcloud
The sun does not shine in Chicago.
I saw many faces here
Who would've been sad,
But they were empty instead.
I saw two silvery ghosts, deer,
Convene in an empty lot.
They conversed, in Silvan tongues,
"Shall we leave then?"
"Yes- the grass is losing here.
The trees are dead, the stones are
Slaves
To the hands of the empty."
The city's metro wurms squirm;
They are infesting the ground.
They scream, unlike the silent dying
Of Novum Eboracum, Screaming
They are emerging, speeding toward
The stable of the planes and back.
Oh Deus,
This is a sad place.
The clouds are continuous,
("It just lets nothing through!")
And there is no hole for sun or light.
Where has the light gone from here?
All the travelers are angry;
Furious smoke bellowing dragons
Populate the streets. They screech
And complain to one another loudly
Over and over. It deadens the ears,
It deafens and batters them.
There is no sun here,
And Luna was elsewhere.
It did not wish to watch this city,
Both left together,
And Luna wept that her Children
The Second-born, would forget
Happiness and love and
All virtue that Life had in it.
Literature
Tears Nonet
Tears are streaming down my upward turned face,
as my heart once again starts to race.
This is what it's all about now,
the power of past's gone somehow.
Crying is renewal.
It's gone, the cruel.
We are now free.
To just be.
To cry
tears.
Literature
the sun makes me feel unpoetic
i hate feeling terrible on hot days.
it feels u n p o e t i c
like an unwanted barricade keeping me
from the only nonsense thoughts
that keep me sane [enough for people to see]
suns encircle images only of purgatory
and the rain of my paradise -
because then sadness feels wonderful.
it feels right.
i could always feel terrible on a rainy day
no matter how happy
those drops make me otherwise.
it is under the rain
that my tears feel enough.
because no matter how broken i seem to be
i'm not broken enough
for you to take me seriously.
because when you see the sun outside
and the make-believe couples in love
kissing under steel
Literature
Phoenix Songs
Breath like smoke on cold mornings,
we'd watch the sun peak over the mountains
and you'd whisper,
"Phoenix rises in the east,
beak filled with song and feathers burning,
the hope of adventure at the start of a new day."
Phoenix was a mystery
to a twelve year old boy with big dreams;
in the hours that passed
from one dawn to the next,
I'd imagine a plume of red-orange-yellow-gold
and search the horizon
as if Phoenix would choose to enlighten me
on the ways of waking the world.
Twenty years, turtle slow,
and the only thing that changed was our routine;
we watched the day start
from opposite sides of the sea
but I always whispered your word
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Sandburg is the Yeats to my Eliot.
The deer in the empty lot are real. They were statues, I suppose. I saw them from the train.
I hate cities. There is so much death, so much cold. I have given cities chances. The only one I've liked at all was London. Chicago... Chicago was worse than New York.
Chicago, when I arrived, was overcast for days. The cloudcover just swallowed up all the light. I could feel the life draining out of me, feel those godforsaken succubus clouds eat at me.
Chicago was a great mausoleum of death and despair when I was there. If you livei n Chicago and love it... I'm actually okay with that. Every person should love their homeland.
But I cried for Mississippi. I cried for it. I needed my trees and grass and green life. I needed the sun, but the smog blocked it out. It made me afraid of the future.
The deer in the empty lot are real. They were statues, I suppose. I saw them from the train.
I hate cities. There is so much death, so much cold. I have given cities chances. The only one I've liked at all was London. Chicago... Chicago was worse than New York.
Chicago, when I arrived, was overcast for days. The cloudcover just swallowed up all the light. I could feel the life draining out of me, feel those godforsaken succubus clouds eat at me.
Chicago was a great mausoleum of death and despair when I was there. If you livei n Chicago and love it... I'm actually okay with that. Every person should love their homeland.
But I cried for Mississippi. I cried for it. I needed my trees and grass and green life. I needed the sun, but the smog blocked it out. It made me afraid of the future.
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Love this so much. Great narrative piece, utterly great