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Equestria Vanishing Ch. 1

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And then Julius was ponies.

Don't worry, poetry is still my true forte, peoples.


I'd love if you had a second or three for some comments/ constructive criticism. It's been so long since I've made fiction that I find myself a little in the dark.


(The picture I use with permission!!! I asked the wonderful artist permission back when I first submitted to Equestria Daily and they were gracious enough to allow me to use their wonderful art.)
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